FOCUSED REVISIONS/ EMBEDDING DAY
Do now: Take out your TFA essay
Objectives:
- Use focused revision activities to help improve writing
- Embed quotes to develop more concise, sophisticated analysis
Agenda:
- Do now
- ORB (BLUE ONLY)
- Why embed? Look at sample.
- Take ONE body paragraph:
- Highlight quote in pink
- Highlight analysis in yellow
- CIRCLE the significant words from quote
- One back of paper, revise the quote/analysis to embed quote into analysis
- Passive Voice and Zombies
- Revise other body paragraphs
- Writing conference form
- Summarizer
HW: Writing conference sign-ups will be on my classroom door THURSDAY at 7:15AM. 3 students can sign up per free mod.Read Act 2.4 and complete journal #4 for FRIDAY.
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